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独角莽夫 2010-07-23
第一次写没什么经验,希望大家多多指教~顺便评个分咯~
我的TOPIC是:Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree.?划线是我觉得有点问题的地方~
Currently the phenomenon that the unequal propotion of male and female students in one subject is more apparent than before.Thus,a suggestion that university ought to allocate the same amount of boys and girls in every subjects is made by some people.In my point of view,to make alosolntely equal number of students is not realistic..But the university have to take measure to help to balance the scale of different gender sttudents.
Indeed, certain disadvantages exist when male and female students are allocated to identical number which may lead to fierce competition in studying.For instance, either boys or girls may organise a group to defend each other .Such competition will make students live a stressful life. In addition to it,the allocation will not well adjust to students’ interest and ability.it is o...
第一次写没什么经验,希望大家多多指教~顺便评个分咯~
我的TOPIC是:Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree.?划线是我觉得有点问题的地方~
Currently the phenomenon that the unequal propotion of male and female students in one subject is more apparent than before.Thus,a suggestion that university ought to allocate the same amount of boys and girls in every subjects is made by some people.In my point of view,to make alosolntely equal number of students is not realistic..But the university have to take measure to help to balance the scale of different gender sttudents.
Indeed, certain disadvantages exist when male and female students are allocated to identical number which may lead to fierce competition in studying.For instance, either boys or girls may organise a group to defend each other .Such competition will make students live a stressful life. In addition to it,the allocation will not well adjust to students’ interest and ability.it is obvious that female are more talented in the application of language while male have competence in science and technology.Therefore,students learning the subject which they are not good at may not behave well and feel upset.
Although shortcornings of universities’ accept equal numbers of differernt gender students,we can not deny that it will bring more advantages than disadvantage.Female and male students are counterparts. People are more willing to help their opposite sex than the same sex. Less jealous and more attrative,they aided each other and improve their study efficiency.Whats more,it will creat some inspiration with the collide of diferent soul.On the contraty,high proportion of the same gender will cause boring atmosphere in learning .In a class full of girls, the teacher ask a question and few of them raise up their hands.while in the class with more boys,girls become active to show themselves.
In conclusion,I approve with the balance scale of male and female college sthdents in one subjects.But the interest and competence of different students should also be considered as a significant factor in dealing with this issue.
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