救猫咪3:反击战

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• 因为，一个完美的“创意推销”和“剧情梗概”不仅会帮助你卖出剧本，并且会帮助你将这个故事写得更好。它逼迫你找到这部电影的精华，那个“扣人心弦的点”，并且将这一点凸显在你的“创意推销”的中心位置上，这样你就可以更好、更丰满流畅地写出这一点。 (查看原文)

  紫紫紫 1赞 2017-10-10 21:18:10

• ► Tone - “Is it a comedy or a drama?” If I ask this, if I can't tell whether to laugh or cry, you are not communicating. ► One Joke - Your idea, while interesting, is limited. If I can't see where it goes beyond the gimmick, I won't ask for more. ► No Stakes - One cause of me saying “Who cares?” is there isn't enough on the line for the hero. I have to sense importance. (查看原文)

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